Pitch Feedback

Last lesson, we gave our film pitch, which included our two mood boards, film synopsis and analysis of two films in our chosen genre.
We got a lot of positive and constructive feedback. Most of the feeback was to do with the particular shot where out protagonist will be drunk. We know that this shot is deliberately breaking convention, but we've chosen to do that, as it makes our piece more unique.

Feedback:
- To make the background party music distorted and warped, to emphasise the characters intoxication.
- To maybe add some point of view shots when our protagonist is drunk, to indicate his disorientation, and to make the audience feel present.

These were the main points that we recieved, and whilst filming and editing, we'll try to apply these ideas to improve our sequence. Some of the ideas, may be too much, and going away further from the social realist drama conventions; obviously if this is the case, and the shots and sound doesnt work, we'll scrap that part.

We're very pleased with our feedback, and we got a positive opinion on our film extract.