Class Feedback

In class today we went around the classroom in our groups to analyze other groups blogs. Individually we had to suggest one positive and one improvement each which we should make to the blogs.

This is the feedback we got from the other groups, about our blog-

POSITIVES

• Good descriptive writing
• Nice animatic
• '"I like the production company, but 'Twin' and 'Production' should be in different places"
• Shows development of ideas well
• Lots of information
• Good research
• Good mood boards

IMPROVEMENTS

• Not enough pictures
• Mixed up, not in order
• Random videos with no comments
• Work not spread out amongst group members
• Terrible logo needs attention... (This comes from a group that doesn't even have an ident)
• Requires more comprehensive notes...Try to put some feelings into them-Too impersonal.
• Lack of images

We understand it is essential to receive feedback as it shows us how well we are doing and gives us constructive criticism which is really useful to improve our blog. Later this lesson or in the near future we are going to put these improvements into action and hopefully overall improve our blog.
Our new group is formed out of two thriller groups. Me (Harriet) and Danielle are from thriller group p2-38 and Ram is from P2-40. I like to think that because this is our second project and blog, we will have made significant improvements and learned from our mistakes since last time, therefore i hope this blog is better than our last thriller blog.